Welcome to the notes page for I Hraet You! Here you'll find a random assortment of information about the story -- kind of like DVD extras, only not in a DVD or consumable without a minor commitment to digesting the info at hand.
Work with me here. I'm a typer, not a movie-er.
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Anyway, read on for some cool-ish information you won't see anywhere else. Because really, how many people do you know that would go so far to construct a world destined to revolve around a kinda-sorta-psychic harem hunter? Besides you, Jeremy? Whoever you are?
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I'll get the non-sequitur down someday.
Work with me here. I'm a typer, not a movie-er.
...
Anyway, read on for some cool-ish information you won't see anywhere else. Because really, how many people do you know that would go so far to construct a world destined to revolve around a kinda-sorta-psychic harem hunter? Besides you, Jeremy? Whoever you are?
...
I'll get the non-sequitur down someday.
(May '13 Notes)
HOUSEKEEPING!
1) Chapters will start popping up again on the 13th,
which according to my calendar is on a Monday.
So it’s pretty likely that I’ll snap back to the old
two-chapters-a-week, Monday-Thursday scheduling; I’m not going to commit to
that schedule till the end of time, but for the time being I think that’ll
do. The only issue is trying to figure
out how those chapters will fit in with posts of other stuff (since I’m
assuming game-related stuff like the Let’s Discuss posts are a lot more
popular), and beyond that I don’t know the exact frequency I’ll end up settling
on. I want about three posts on the blog
a week so I don’t overwhelm others and myself, but I want to strike a nice
balance between IHY and the other
stuff. Well, I’ll just have to see how
it goes…
2) I’m beginning to suspect I put IHY on too long of a hiatus.
I ended the first part at just the right stopping point, but it just
feels like if I’d kept on moving shortly afterward, I would’ve been farther
along in the story (and indeed, I DEFINITELY want to get farther along in the
story). Ehhhhh…maybe every once in a
while I’ll throw out a bonus chapter to speed things up. That aside, I doubt I’ll be taking as long a
break as I have before, mostly because the way things are looking for this
“saga” I won’t be left wanting for chapters. I could be wrong, but I’ve got a pretty strong
hunch on this one.
3) It’s very possible that this post, like the others before it,
may end up changing the next time you see it.
I might rejigger this post so that it’ll be something along the lines of
a DVD extra or director’s commentary or something -- you know, lots of little
fun facts that’ll give some insight into IHY
(along with none-too-subtle foreshadowing about what comes next). If I don’t, then I might make a post like
“Notes on I Hraet You (2)” that’ll do the same in the future.
4) Again, I’m always ready for some guest chapters. If you think you’ve got what it takes, leave
a comment here or the Feedback page (visible on the main IHY tab) and tell me what you’ve got on your mind. We can pound things out, and I’ll gladly
offer proper credit and attribution.
Same goes for fan art -- though I’m probably a ways away from thinking
about something like that, I might as well make the offer clear as long as I’m
here.
THE ACTUAL STORY STUFF!
1) The thrust of the first saga, “The Man Who Would Be Hearty” was
mostly about leading man Lloyd discovering his powers -- along with the risks
it involved, and the threat of the masked menace Gaston Leroux. This upcoming saga, “Good Will Hearting”,
will be (hopefully) about Lloyd coming to terms with that power; he’ll have to
figure out what he’s going to do about those risks and Gaston, and start doing
a little setup for his own noble counterattack.
It’s in this saga that the title will start making sense -- and with it,
the beginning of an even wilder adventure.
2) It’s hard to say how far along in the story we are, but I’m
pretty confident that there’s enough potential for three sagas after this one,
at least. That’s a really hazy number
right now, though, so let’s not dwell on it any longer.
3) That said, the way things are looking (as a holdover from last
time), I’d say that each saga is going to be split according to five major
events. Mini-arcs, if you will. The last saga was primarily about the setup,
and this one is more about…er, more setup.
But it’s different this time, in that the setup in this case is about
Lloyd capitalizing on his power. If
you’ve read the other chapters, you’ll know that there are three loose ends
that he has to tend to first -- and as a result, three of those arcs will be
focused on him tending to those ends.
4) It’s not going to come up for a while (i.e. in this saga), but
there pretty much HAS to be an arc that reveals Lloyd’s past. I won’t say anything about the details, but
let’s just say if I do it right, it’ll knock you right the hell out of your
chair.
…See what I did there?
THE CHARACTERS AND POOP!
1) The character page pretty much confirms this already, but Lloyd,
JP, Patton, Trixie, and Mrs. Overdose form “the core five” cast members of the
story. Obviously Lloyd is the one you’ll
be seeing the most, but the other four are going to be key players in their own
way -- the Five Man Band, as TV Tropes would put it. That doesn’t mean the other characters -- and
trust me, there are plenty of them -- won’t get their chances to shine, but in
terms of the story’s chief task force it’s going to be those guys and ladies.
2) Unfortunately, Gaston ALSO has a core group of allies that are
out to make Lloyd’s life less than pleasant.
You probably won’t be seeing them all in this saga, but a couple of them
will be making an appearance. Who are
they? What are they? Well, figuring out who among Porbeagle’s
citizens are hanging around with some bad company is a part of the saga’s fun
-- along with one of JP’s chief goals.
3) Incidentally, some other characters will pop up throughout the
story as well. Will they partner up with
Lloyd? Or side with Gaston? Who knows?!
(Well, I do, but I think I’ll keep that to myself for now.)
THE MECHANICS AND WRITING AND
NACHOS!
1) I’m assuming that one of the challenges that’ll pop up with IHY is making sure everyone has a
distinct enough voice. With characters
like Lloyd and Trixie that should be simple enough…but when it comes time for
these characters to get in a big room and start hashing it out, I need to make
each line of dialogue immediately indicative of who’s speaking. I feel like I’ve taken some strides toward
that with characters old and new, but it might just be something I have to
watch out for.
2) By extension, I’m probably going have to be a lot more mindful
of the voice from now on. Reading stuff
like Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy (which,
like many of my books, tends to disappear and reappear at random thanks to
wormhole shenanigans) has made me conscious about my style, so I need to take
things up a notch in the near future.
Hopefully writing IHY chapters
will give me all the practice I need.
3) A recent concern that’s popped up -- I’m wondering if Lloyd is
absurd enough. He’s a ham, no question,
and his logic is pretty suspect at times, but in the face of the rest of the
cast I can’t help but wonder if he’s been surpassed…and if his absurdity is
consistent from one scene to the next.
Well, I guess I’ll just have to see how it goes; if I keep working with
these characters, I’m guessing their characterization will become a lot more
instinctive for me.
4) Writing the sound effects (Ka-[insert vaguely-related term here
in all caps]) is at once a joy and a challenge.
It’ll be interesting to see how people react to those; it might be one
of those “hit or miss” circumstances you hear so much about.
5) I wonder if my foreshadowing is a little too obvious. I’ve teased more than a few plot points
already, but I’m a little worried I’m sticking a big red flag into them instead
of letting it flow naturally. Then
again, as the guy writing all this junk I have a fairly good idea of what’s
coming up; the surprise is lost on me, but with any luck readers should be
well-rewarded without getting hammered in the head.
THE RANDOM JUNKYARD!
1) There WILL be wrestling later on. That much is non-negotiable. That’ll also probably be the arc where Patton
gets his time to shine, for obvious reasons.
Chief among them, the appearance of his rival -- because as you’ll soon
discover, I have a weak spot for foils and rivalries.
2) It goes without saying, but Lloyd isn’t the only one with
special powers. In fact, pretty much all
of them have a name. And a sort-of
origin story. It’ll all get explained
somewhere down the line.
3) And on that note, you could argue that the villains (such as
they are) can be organized into separate but interlocking factions. You can look forward to a glimpse into “the
hierarchy” later -- not all at once, obviously, but it’ll start coming
together.
4) I still need to decide on a theme song for Lloyd. Any suggestions are more than welcome.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaand
that’ll do it for now. Hope to see you
guys around next week when IHY goes
live. Though I suspect that I should
probably get on making some new art for it.
God, why do I do these things to myself…?
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(October '13 Notes)
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(October '13 Notes)
--All right, let’s start
off with the most obvious thing: with the Sheila Arc finished, I Hraet You has reached an undeniable
milestone. And it only took me…
*checks archive page*
FORTY-TWO CHAPTERS?! Are you kidding
me?!
Well…damn. I didn’t expect the actual chapter count to
run this long. It’s kind of a worrying
precedent; this is the first of five scenes for the act, and yet its length is
almost as long as the entirety of everything I wrote last year. I guess this means that I’m going to have to
pick up the pace if I want to reach some of the cooler arcs in the story…or any
arc, for that matter. I guess I’ll have
to consider editing certain sections down, or in the future extending the
average word count so that there’s more content in less space. If nothing else, I’ll probably have to split
that one big Scene into two; it makes the archive page look a bit more
attractive, if you ask me.
--That said, I like the
content in the Sheila Arc. The thrust of
this part of the story is Lloyd figuring out how to use his powers -- not just
the mechanics behind them, but the means to help others. Of the three characters he promised to help,
Sheila is the easiest of the bunch…for a given definition of “easiest”,
considering what she put him through.
But it is a good starting point for him, as well as setup for things to
come.
--It seems like the
more I wrote about Sheila, the more fun I had with the story. It would have been easy to make her the “shy,
busty glasses girl” and leave it at that, but then again she wouldn’t be a
worthy member of the IHY cast if I
did. Revealing those different sides to
her -- even if they were under duress -- was probably one reason why the arc
ran as long as it did. Well, that and
the fact that she’s an important person to Lloyd. Like he said, Sheila is one of his first new
friends in years; take that as you will, but for now I’m keeping my lips
sealed.
--It’s worth noting,
though, that Sheila’s mom Jane came right the hell out of nowhere. She was barely going to be in one scene, but
I realized that stripping her of story time would be a detriment to Sheila’s
character. And then one thing led to
another, and she started getting weirder, and now she’s a full-on member of the
cast. I wonder what I can do with the
world’s wildest mom…well, I already know what I can do, but I’m not saying.
--Gaston sure made
things get dark in a hurry. I think
that’s going to start being a thing -- at least once or twice more, just for
effect. He is the villain, after all, so
it’s only natural that it hits the fan whenever he makes an appearance. That said, my intent is to make chapters with
two-word titles the chapters where things get serious. If all goes well, there’ll be a chapter
called “Problem Solving” that’s going to blow your brains out.
--Anyway, let’s talk
about some of the other new characters.
Arjuna is actually someone I came up with before IHY; he’s more or less a stock character I made to go into any
number of stories as needed (if you check the blog’s archives, you’ll find a
version of him in Four Dudes Go to Hell). He’s not going to be a core member of the cast -- the five-man band is largely in place as
it is -- but he WILL be a solid contributing member to the story’s B-team. Another group, so to speak, that works
alongside Team Lloyd. Another member of
said team has made a couple of cameo appearances, but he won’t get shown off in
full until the upcoming arc.
(He doesn't look like this guy. Not entirely, at least.)
--Speaking of which,
the next arc -- which I have no problems spoiling here -- is going to focus on
the terse bug enthusiast, May. Thing is,
she’s going to ratchet up the difficulty for Lloyd significantly; the
groundwork has been laid long beforehand for Lloyd to have plenty of questions
that need answering if he’s going to trot around town helping people, but with
May the very concept of helping -- and indeed, Lloyd himself -- is going to end
up deconstructed. A VERY important part
of this story is establishing that not every person in the world (woman,
especially) is in need of Lloyd’s white-knighting, and May is the primary means
of establishing that. She’s going to
force Lloyd to reconsider his actions and aims, whether he likes it or not.
--That said, JP is also
going to play a bigger part in this upcoming arc. It goes without saying that he’s had enough
of Lloyd’s shit, but it’s about to reach a fever pitch. Not having Lloyd’s power, he doesn’t have the attachment
to the extrasensory that his brother does, and even then is significantly more
practical. So it’s only natural that the
two of them start butting heads over matters, and both of them present valid points
for their procedures and arguments. Even
so, if Lloyd is going to be the key factor in helping others, JP is going to be
the key factor in solving the mystery behind Porbeagle’s plight.
--And indeed, JP is
pretty much going to have to play detective here. The last few chapters of the Sheila Arc have
a lot of details packed into them, and sorting it all out is going to fall on
JP more than it does Lloyd…well, ideally.
JP’s rival character has already been introduced in the form of Dex
Hawkfield, so it’s going to be a battle of wits as he puts together pieces of
the “crime scene” and reconstructs the events that happened. Of course, he’ll pretty much HAVE to do that
to clean up the dirty dealings that transpire -- including trying to unravel
the secret behind the fake evidence that
starts popping up.
--It’s worth noting,
though, that the core five will all get “rivals” to butt heads with. JP gets one in Hawkfield, and Patton’s has
been vaguely referenced a couple of times.
Mrs. Overdose’s is going to be another key player in this arc (and in
Gaston’s plans overall), while Trixie’s is going to get a mention at best for
the time being. As for Lloyd…well,
arguably, he gets THREE rivals. One of
them is Gaston, of course. Another is a
wannabe rival. But the third becomes a
challenge in his own right -- and if you thought Lloyd could ham it up, just
wait till the new guy takes the stage.
--I made some new art
for the archive page, but now I get the feeling that I’m going to have to do
all the art for the cast over again to match…and on top of that, add in the art
for new cast members. I am NOT looking forward to that.
--I guess I pretty much
invalidated the cliffhanger at the end of the arc, didn’t I? Well, come on now -- did you really think
that Lloyd would get booted out of his own story? He’ll be back…it’s just that he’s going to
(almost literally) face a few trials of his own, independent of his audition
room antics.
--Things on the IHY docket: a rock concert, a big
barbecue, a corporate infiltration, a wrestling bonanza, blimp shenanigans,
cult warfare, riots in the streets, the emergence of a killer robot, the
emergence of a mechanized T-rex, and some manner of ghost haunting. Among other things.
And that’ll just about
do it for now. Till next time, then,
keep on enjoying I Hraet You --
because rest assured, I Hraet You is
enjoying you. As well as a work of
fiction can, at least.
I plan to start reading your story soon. I have to get caught up on some other things, but it is on my list. I'm really looking forward to it.
ReplyDeleteGood to hear. Like I've said elsewhere, you won't be wanting for content for a good while...though I can only wonder how people might react to said content. You'd best start preparing yourself for wombats now. It's the only way to survive.
ReplyDelete~I read till chapter 2, then I had to start classes again and lacked time! But it was really good! I`m gonna continue reading IHY after the 15th!!(Which is the date of my exam! Curse exams! Always there to give judgement on my answers!) Also, can I ask where you got the first photo from? o.o Is it a game? Looks interesting
ReplyDeleteThe first photo's from PlayStation Home, a sort of free add-on/interface you can explore with an avatar you make. I haven't had much experience with it, but from what I've heard, it's pretty terrible. And pointless.
ReplyDeleteIn any case, whenever you decide to jump into IHY, you'll have plenty of content to start diving into. Just take it at your own pace, and carve out a win on your exam. The story and I will be here for a while yet.